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QCD Axion Strings or Seeds?
by Simone Blasi, Alberto Mariotti
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Authors (as registered SciPost users):  Simone Blasi 
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Preprint Link:  https://arxiv.org/abs/2405.08060v1 (pdf) 
Date submitted:  20240709 11:28 
Submitted by:  Blasi, Simone 
Submitted to:  SciPost Physics 
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Academic field:  Physics 
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Approaches:  Theoretical, Phenomenological 
Abstract
We study the impact of QCD axion strings in the cosmological history of electroweak (EW) symmetry breaking, focussing on the minimal KSVZ axion model. We consider the case of the pure SM Higgs potential as well as a simple scenario with a first order EW phase transition. We capture the effect of the PecceiQuinn (PQ) sector within an effectivetheory approach for the Higgs field, where the axion string core and the heavy PQ states are integrated out. The relevant parameters in this effective theory are controlled by the size of the portal coupling between the Higgs and the PQ scalar, and the mass of the PQ radial excitation. We determine the range of portal couplings for which the axion strings can strongly affect the dynamics of EW symmetry breaking. In the case of a first order EW phase transition, the strings can act as seeds by either catalyzing the nucleation of (nonspherical) bubbles, or leading to the completion of the phase transition by triggering a classical instability.
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The study investigated the impact of QCD axion strings during the electroweak phase transition in the most minimal KSVZ axion solution to the strong CP problem. The publication criteria are amply met, and I recommend the publication of the study.
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1 Throughout the work, it is repeatedly emphasized that the value of the portal coupling is treated as a free parameter, and a deliberately agnostic stance is taken regarding its origin. However, in the absence of QCD interactions, it seems reasonable to state that a small value of the portal coupling is technically natural, as in the limit where it approaches zero, an enhanced PoincarĂ© symmetry would be restored (e.g. 1310.0223). Consequently, since the effects of QCD are 3loop suppressed, one could conclude that it is natural to expect the portal coupling to be small. I would like to ask the authors whether this reasoning is correct. In that case, perhaps the discussion in the 'Setup' section could be expanded slightly.
2Regarding the case of the pure SM + PQ theory, is it possible to determine whether the presence of the PQ scalar field contributes to the stability of the electroweak vacuum (e.g., 1203.0237)? It could provide further motivation to consider this case.
3The phenomenological consequences of the SM + PQ case are somewhat briefly addressed at the end of Section 4. Could the authors provide a more quantitative justification for why one should expect that the spontaneous breakdown of the electroweak symmetry could potentially modify the QCD axion string dynamics in the early universe?
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The Authors of this article studied for the first time how the QCD axion strings impact the evolution of the electroweak phase transition. They focus on both the case in which the EW sector is the Standard Model one, as well as the one of theories Beyond the Standard Model with a first order phase transition.
In the minimal KSVZ model, where a quartic interaction between the Peccei Quinn complex scalar and the Standard Model Higgs doublet is possible, there is an effective coupling between the Higgs field and the axion strings. The effect of the strings on the electroweak phase transition is studied as a function of this effective interaction. The Authors determined the conditions under which the axion string can develop a sizeable Higgs core, where the EW symmetry is broken at temperatures above the EW scale. They found that the effect is controlled by the ratio between the portal coupling and the Peccei Quinn self interaction and by the mass of the radial mode. This can modify the dynamics of the QCD axion strings in the early universe.
Moreover, the Authors consider beyond the Standard Model theories with first order electroweak phase transitions and show that the axion strings may modify the electroweak phase transition in two ways: by catalysing bubble nucleation or by developing a classical instability. This has an impact on predictions for baryogengesis and gravitational wave detection.
This submission meets all of the general acceptance criteria and shows an important result on the effect of QCD axion strings on the cosmological history of the electroweak symmetry breaking and it deserves publication.
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1  Can the Authors give an estimate of the effect on the numerical simulation for the detailed dynamics of QCD axion strings in the early universe?
2  How realistic is the parameterisation for the EFT in real models?
3  How would the effects of QCD axion string change in DFSZ models?
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